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Jul 20, 2017
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Puc finds something new.
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I really like your art style, but it's a little hard to follow on what's going on. Maybe you could try sort of jump cutting a little less. That or have a slightly different approach as to the angle of some of the illustrations to make what exactly you're showing a bit easier to understand at a glance.
This attempt at constructive criticism may not have been too helpful, sorry about that. Wish you luck with the rest of your comic!!
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