the DEAD BODY
Jan 02, 2016
At 9 years old, Nicole Mitchell witness her father, FBI Frank Mitchell's brutal murder and her younger sister, Jacklyn abducted. She spent her teenage years in an institute where she suffered even more abuse at the hands of those who where there to help her.
Now 15 years later a different psyche has taken control of her, to seek revenge, to deliver pain, to bring those that destroyed her innocence to a final resting place. Nicole has become the dark angel of vengeance, known only as RAZOR..the very instrument used to slay her father. Those that cross the wrong side of her blade, rarely live to tell about it. She is a young woman with a death wish, taking a journey to find her broken soul and God have mercy on those that stand in her way.
Tayo Rafferty
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Your art-style is incredibly effective at creating a mood for your narrative but I would advise you to think carefully about how you choose to phrase things. Maybe try and be more elusive about the characters and make the audience want to keep reading instead of telling us her father is going to die you could hint at it and have her tell the story of how he died so that at the end when he finally does bite the dust it feels more shocking.
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At 9 years old, Nicole Mitchell witness her father, FBI Frank Mitchell's brutal murder and her younger sister, Jacklyn abducted. She spent her teenage years in an institute where she suffered even more abuse at the hands of those who where there to help her.
Now 15 years later a different psyche has taken control of her, to seek revenge, to deliver pain, to bring those that destroyed her innocence to a final resting place. Nicole has become the dark angel of vengeance, known only as RAZOR..the very instrument used to slay her father. Those that cross the wrong side of her blade, rarely live to tell about it. She is a young woman with a death wish, taking a journey to find her broken soul and God have mercy on those that stand in her way.
Now 15 years later a different psyche has taken control of her, to seek revenge, to deliver pain, to bring those that destroyed her innocence to a final resting place. Nicole has become the dark angel of vengeance, known only as RAZOR..the very instrument used to slay her father. Those that cross the wrong side of her blade, rarely live to tell about it. She is a young woman with a death wish, taking a journey to find her broken soul and God have mercy on those that stand in her way.
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