Elissa... there's actual real tears in my eyes I'm so extremely proud of you man<3 this is absolutely wonderful, jaw-dropping gorgeous!!! IT'S SO SO GOOD YOU TALENTED ANGEL you completely nailed it!!
I love that we get Kho and Ryvia just being teens (while also hyped for an execution (?) lmaooo) and this whole update cracked me up multiple times (WAIHRAH)
it just reads so smoothly and you get a way easier grip on who these characters are and what they are to each other and like man. you did so well. I'm emo now
(AND OF COURSE ESFIR MY BEAUTIFUL GIRL<3)