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Jan 03, 2015
My inspiration comes from real-life experiences, but this story has to be considered as a fiction. All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
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Yop,
Je vais essayer de faire une revue complète de toutes les planches aujourd'hui ; je commencerai chaque point soit par "suggestion", quand c'est un truc que je trouve mieux tourné, mais que tu peux totalement ignorer ; soit pas "correction" quand c'est une vraie faute (de grammaire, d'ortho, de sémantique, ...).
Go !
• correction : "we both" -> il faut enlever "both", sinon vous avez travaillé séparément.
• suggestion : ajouter "together" dans la même phrase, encore plus explicite.
• suggestion : "it was done on paper" --> "it was drawn on paper" (la langue anglaise aime plus les verbes expressifs que la langue française)
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My inspiration comes from real-life experiences, but this story has to be considered as a fiction. All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
I already published 100 pages in french on my blog, I'm now trying to translate them by myself. Please tell me about the mistakes I make, I'll fix them. :)
My inspiration comes from real-life experiences, but this story has to be considered as a fiction. All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
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