aight, the first official chapter of the redone version from my first.
i know that is kinda rushed but i really want to take this time for real to make the comic story i always wanted to make.
and short note there, i clearly meant that "20th june" what it says in comic is telling like that changed her impression about the world, like it's getting more and more dangerous with wierd events and all, few days later it'll change herself more in the few pages
i'll make next time the comic more a bit better, i try something else to make it readable and easy to understand.
i kinda know there are some issues with the grammar, i try my best to improve, i sometimes forget how it usually is formed or else ^^;
that's all, also thanks for reading the first half of the chapter!
Akiko Akahoshi was a 17 year old girl
who gets involved into a complicated mess about the existence of the Devils and Conflicts about the Clans.
Nurse-chan, Yuriko Rose, who saved Akiko from the Devil she almost got her own Soul at cost, tells her that she needs her help to find the
sacred Girl who was in the White-Sakura Clan who vanished many decade ago and that her Partner that she tried to find her last time was her own sister Kyoko who fell her own tragic death into this mission.
But why her? who's is this Sacred Girl she talked about? what will happen to her? and what was about her Sister Kyoko, though she hasn't heard about or know about her a long time ago?
What's up with the other Clans conflicts?
She will soon know the Answer and never forget the Adventure she had...
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