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The Other side of Two Shards (discontinued)

Chapter 1 pt 1

Chapter 1 pt 1

Oct 12, 2019

Once there was a princess and she did not like to follow the path her parents had set out for her. The princess was interested in the way of the sword and (in a way) one of the knights who lived by it. This knight was a good amount taller and stronger than her, but he was kind and gentle to those who deserved it. And his vibrant heteronomia eyes were oh so captivating her which were a bright green due to her families' royal bloodline. She watched the knight train everyday after her lessons without fail, well that was until one day she was told that she would be crowned queen after the annual birthstone expedition instead of her elder sister Ilene. The princess was both excited and horrified at the news because her elder sister wanted that crown and worked very hard for it, but there was nothing she could do about it now. The princess went outside and was heading to the training grounds when she bumped in something and fell on the ground. "ouch", she said as she checked the damage, "did I hit a wall or something?" she groaned. As the princess mumbles to herself she hears a low chuckle and she, the knight that she watches on the daily, reaches out his hand to help her up, "  I sure hope not or my parents have some explaining to do." she blushed knowing the man of her dreams watched her make a fool of  herself. As she took his hand he pulled her up in a single motion and dusted her off. "W-what is your name and station fool?" the princess asked with what little confidence she had left. " I am Sir Roman, my lady and I happen to reside with the knights of the royal guard" the knight said with a low bow. " Adela" the princess states, " As long as you keep shut of what happened earlier you and only you may call me Adela." Roman looked up at Adela to see her smile only slightly and that was when it started. An relationship that would not happen on normal terms but still ended up to be. After Adela was crowned queen the two were able to keep their relationship unders raps until the first two children were born out of the fruit of their love, the first prince and princess of the Emerald Kingdom Bryn and Alexandra the two were a few years apart in age and Adela was able to convince her mother to let her keep seeing Roman under the condition that he could never become king, she agreed. Then the twins were born, but they were born earlier than they were supposed to and  every one in the royal court thought they would be without any infinities since Adela had two children already, but they were wrong. At the age of seven Kai was already on equal stands with the holy knights and Kori could create one of the strongest magic shields in the kingdom. Learning this Adela decided that her sister would be better at raising her beautiful boys after Roman had gone missing and could no longer be of help to her. On the night they turned fifteen, their aunt gave them very shocking news, she said, " I have found you two the most perfect wives that will also help this kingdom." Kori looks at her in disgust while Kai responds to Ilene with, "You know we are not interested in women and marrying a guy would be more beneficial due to our secondary genders also Bryln will marry any girl you want him to." Ilene gets pissed and yells, "You WILL Obey Me! It's not like your Mother cares!" The twins went quiet and agreed with her since they didn't know that she could be proved wrong and went to their room for the night. When they got to their room Kori started sobbing and his eyes began to glow. "Why would we run away if we have nowhere to go to?" Kai says, shocking him. " I forgot you could read my mind." Kori pauses, " And can't we just make a place to live wherever we go." he states,"Okay fine, but if we get caught you are the one to take the blame." Kai responds. As he said that Kori turns off the light and opens the window, "Lets go!" he says, jumping into the forest as Kai follows. A few seconds into the forest and they hear Ilene scream, "Guards!!"

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Reina Hartwright
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It's not bad! From the intro there's some fantasy elements I'm curious about, like what an infinity is, but I'm sure that will be shown in the story.
For the spelling and grammar mistakes, you can use Google Docs to check it for you! Unless you don't use Google... it's the best I use so far in free programs.
What you can improve is your overall pace, you can describe the events in more detail, especially the first two sentences. It shifts to the present time too quickly.

Keep practicing and you will improve over time. Good luck!

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