Prologue
Mar 29, 2025
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great chapter, great lead. I love the names Thaddeus and Orpheus(mostly cause I've used them myself in previous story concepts). I will say it would be good to go through and analyze the grammar of the chapter before hand. For example, "Thaddeus remarked" wasn't quite the correct phrasing. Thaddeus stated is more accurate to the moment. A remark is usually a light jab of sorts. A statement meanwhile is blank, no sarcasm or jest, straight to the point, or state to the point if may XD
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