Oh my. Isn't it just annoying when people don't listen just because your telling the truth?
On another note I like the way your able to convey the state of the world so succinctly in their dialogue and the lady's bias and desperate urge to segregate herself from the "monsters" she fights, even tho they seem to share more similarities than differences. Its to the point where she won't even listen to the monster talk, as if she's scared of the conflicting ideas compared to her own ingrained beliefs.
This is some fantastic story telling👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽🤩.
Just one mistake I'd point out would be when the monster said "say the girl that can turn into a monster" or something close. It would be more grammatically correct to say "says..." instead.