chapter 1: Pages 1-5
Jul 03, 2017
hi, so this is the first page so tell me what you think can you read all the lettering? does the conversation flow correctly ?
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There are some grammatical mistakes, but it's not too bad that it's a distraction. Pretty good start for an artist just starting their own webcomic.
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