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Aug 17, 2015
David The DaneMan
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Honestly, given that you are drawing with pencil, and scanning it, this ain't bad.
My advice is to clean it up a little bit (do you have PhotoShop or something?) before posting, but other than that, just make a lot of comics.
In terms of writing, I would say that the last bit (he realized he) is confusing. It'd be better if you changed one of the "he"s into a name (the bee / the poo).
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