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a great portrayal of a skewed world by the ppl in power. how to maintain said power. in a way a reflection to how we are manipulated young into being good little clogs in the system ;)
Well, you've got one hell of a story here!!!! On the surface, straight good and evil, then I looked closer and the layers began to unravel. I have huge sympathy for Albion, but I feel he might have done things a little better! Mind you, the whole government machine appears to be massively bent so I can see why he mistrusts them. Poor Fabian is the innocent pawn in this. I know he maimed a lad, but that wasn't entirely his fault. It is the other characters, Lio and Amarra, good people who are doing their best in a grey area of high politics and misdirection!!! The story is turning into a great political thriller as well as a great fantasy tale!! I have loved playing Devil's Advocate in the comments section as well!! It has stimulated some damn good discussion!!!!!
The whole thing is intriguing!! The story has so many layers!! I think it is a great political thriller and I can't wait to see where you take it. I have to admit to having a thing for Lio!!! I have a horrible feeling she is in for a massive wake up call!!!! I don't want spoilers, I will sit and let it all happen!!
Enjoy the ride! ❤
