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Hi, sugah! If you have time, could you chek out my work? Thanx! :D
Hi Mechanictress. I have seen your work as requested and I have to say you have lovely drawing skills and still have room for improvement. Your comic Lune is interesting and I’m curious where it will go. I notice your drawing has improved by every chapter you draw, and that is my observation from the three chapters you had done so I believe your skills will get better when you have drawn more chapters!
Your background drawings are pretty impressive, I especially like the panel with the house (after the moon panel in chapter 3). Still, I have to say your character drawing skills is still pretty rough and hard around the edges. Maybe you could experiment on different thickness of sketching pens to create more texture to your characters to give them more depth and dimension, especially on the hair texture. But I’m sure you will improve when you draw more. Facial expressions and character movements are also important to improve on. You also need to practice more on drawing owls if owls will appear more in this story.
If you feel that every chapter is too long you can always shorten it so you can focus more on the drawing. But shorter pages means the story needs to flow better in shorter amount of columns, so be careful. But decide on whatever makes you comfortable, either way your readers will understand.
I hope you take my words as positive criticism and reinforcement. I mean no harm. So, keep up the good work and I hope you will get many views & subscribers! I’m rooting for you because you just got another subscriber to Lune. (^_^)
Your background drawings are pretty impressive, I especially like the panel with the house (after the moon panel in chapter 3). Still, I have to say your character drawing skills is still pretty rough and hard around the edges. Maybe you could experiment on different thickness of sketching pens to create more texture to your characters to give them more depth and dimension, especially on the hair texture. But I’m sure you will improve when you draw more. Facial expressions and character movements are also important to improve on. You also need to practice more on drawing owls if owls will appear more in this story.
If you feel that every chapter is too long you can always shorten it so you can focus more on the drawing. But shorter pages means the story needs to flow better in shorter amount of columns, so be careful. But decide on whatever makes you comfortable, either way your readers will understand.
I hope you take my words as positive criticism and reinforcement. I mean no harm. So, keep up the good work and I hope you will get many views & subscribers! I’m rooting for you because you just got another subscriber to Lune. (^_^)
oh, sweetie, thank you SO MUCH for your kind comment! It means a lot to me!
Actually, I'm having some difficulties to adapt to digital. My traditional drawing is WAY better and more detailed, but I still need to get used to tablet and screen and, specially, the software...
You can see a sample of it here:
http://mechanictress.deviantart.com/art/fall-whispers-260629659
Yeah, I guess I'll keep the pages at same size and make shorter chapters - around 8 pages (maybe less), it'll let me update more often.
And I have a problem with birds... I don't know why I picked up an owl, anyway, but since it's an owl, I'll have to leave my laziness behind and improve it! òwó~
I'm flattered with all your attention <3 Thanks again, I hope I don't disappoint you! :D
Actually, I'm having some difficulties to adapt to digital. My traditional drawing is WAY better and more detailed, but I still need to get used to tablet and screen and, specially, the software...
You can see a sample of it here:
http://mechanictress.deviantart.com/art/fall-whispers-260629659
Yeah, I guess I'll keep the pages at same size and make shorter chapters - around 8 pages (maybe less), it'll let me update more often.
And I have a problem with birds... I don't know why I picked up an owl, anyway, but since it's an owl, I'll have to leave my laziness behind and improve it! òwó~
I'm flattered with all your attention <3 Thanks again, I hope I don't disappoint you! :D
