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so I made a simple map that represents the water continent, there are some details I couldn't really show it there, but this is the nearest thing to the image inside of my head, the mountain over there is supposed to be full of snow too.
Measure updates!
hey guys, it's me NOBA.
so based on the feedbacks of the readers9in various websites), I'm gonna put some big improvements into the story, it will be available Friday 13th march at 2 A.M GMT+2 and that will be the time of updates instead of 1o P.M GMT +2 before, the name also will change a little, but what you can expect from the improvements is;
1- a less confusing writing style.
2- a reorganizing for Events (it was confusing changing from Gabrel's pov and Elmos's Pov, it will be organized in order of "what happened first" to make it easier to follow the story)
3- more useful information and setting to help the reader know WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING.
4- more descriptive paragraphs and dialogues.
while rereading the chapters isn't necessary, it's still VERY preferable and BADLY recommended, I tried to add some scenes to make it less boring, just try and read it again, even if you liked it before you may like it more, thanks for all your constructive feedbacks, see you tomorrow.
hey guys, it's me NOBA.
so based on the feedbacks of the readers9in various websites), I'm gonna put some big improvements into the story, it will be available Friday 13th march at 2 A.M GMT+2 and that will be the time of updates instead of 1o P.M GMT +2 before, the name also will change a little, but what you can expect from the improvements is;
1- a less confusing writing style.
2- a reorganizing for Events (it was confusing changing from Gabrel's pov and Elmos's Pov, it will be organized in order of "what happened first" to make it easier to follow the story)
3- more useful information and setting to help the reader know WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING.
4- more descriptive paragraphs and dialogues.
while rereading the chapters isn't necessary, it's still VERY preferable and BADLY recommended, I tried to add some scenes to make it less boring, just try and read it again, even if you liked it before you may like it more, thanks for all your constructive feedbacks, see you tomorrow.
