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Ari is beautiful as always. Can I order Ari's commission and pay in ink? if possible, how much ink will one commission cost?
You guys are absolute sweethearts. Thank you so much for the cameo !! I feel like I got a free full page ad in Shounen Jump or something. And the strip itself is super-duper adorable. Uncle Vinnie as scary, over-protective "dad" is comedy gold, and seeing Jeremy in color and in your style is a fabulous treat.
Must figure out some way to return the favor..
Must figure out some way to return the favor..
Hey man! I was wondering if I could ask you something...
Off Topic: Is Crux still available? I found a few pages but nothing else. thanks. Enjoy your work.
you have incredible artistic talent and technique, but I think you need to work on mashing up dialogue and frames. Your characters lack animosity although they are so beautifully drawn and the plot becomes confusing with the placement of panels and text. The tones you use lack contrast--everything looks a bit too washed out and gray-this gives the reader a hard time figuring out where to focus the eyes. The whiteness of your text bubbles in comparison stand out, and therefore become very distracting features. Less tones can be better, especially for impact!! Thing don't have to be complex to look realistic!! Take a look at some manga artist for examples of this--they can teach a lot. Sometimes a character drawn very badly in a comic can look better than one with perfect anatomy--because it brings out emotions and expressiveness. Do you plan out your panels? This is just my opinion, thanks for listening!!
I love your combination of art and stroy telling. Great job keep them coming :)