annuskabriar | Tapas Creator

Rai Muffin Aug 25

Hey!
You probably forgot me, but you gave me some feedback a few months ago.
My garbage time blindness is why it's taken so long to respond (so long the forum topic closed. Your comic's been taunting me from my tab bar for months!).

I'm loving Grey and the Golden Circus so far.
I think you have an issue with pacing (not sure why we needed an entire panel devoted to putting on a jacket for example) and your interiors feel kind lacking.
That said you have a real talent for outside backgrounds, and I love the passion you've put into the lore.
I've subbed so I can see where it goes from here.

As an apology for my lateness, here's some fanart!
(Does the motorcycle look weirdly small? Can you tell I'm not used to drawing them?)

Have a nice day!
Love you, bye!

annuskabriar creator Sep 05

haha yeah my pacing isnt great, especially in chapter one. this is my first published story so im still figuring out how to do pacing well but i do think for my sketches and scripts of newer pages its improved somewhat! if i could id go back and redo chapter one and tighten it up.

also, noted for interior! i struggle a lot with manmade backgrounds haha im used to drawing nature stuff, but i'll keep that in mind and try to put more variety in!

i love this drawing thank you!!!!! i find drawing motorcycles very hard myself so i cant tell if its too small HAHA motorcycles are the ban of my existence

thank you for subbing and sorry for the late response!!! i was on vacation and not really checking my notifications much!

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