Joined Apr 2018 USA, TX.
For now i'm just browsing and open to talk about writing or concepts. I've met a cool person here and have another friend here too. I have ideas of my own, but will show/share them when i feel ready. Like giving or receiving constructive criticism and i will be as kind as possible. It's hard to tell through text and even emojis aren't enough. Feel free to chat or leave a message :)
And my brother drew the picture, in case you were wondering.
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Word and google docs.
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My brother drew this sometime ago for one of my creature ideas. https://www.deviantart.com/steveinsane
Just in case you need proof.
Just in case you need proof.
Thanks for subscribing to God's Vessel!! I hope you enjoy
I was looking around to see what kind of "writing" or "style" attracts people. God, one i read before yours was crazy exposition and just...bad. But the way you did your prologue part 1 caught me off guard. XD at first i kinda had the same feeling it was exposition only, but i was wrong. It had some but a backstory mostly implemented into it which made it easier to get into. i haven't read much further and in all honesty, the description on the side sounds like something i may not be interested in. Really cool prologue though. Who knows, maybe your characters will win me over. I'm very picky and can be cynical when it comes to anything. Mainly because stuff i see is usually boring, uninteresting, copies of old and tired concepts. Sorry about the long message. I tend to do that just in case someone takes what i say the wrong way. I like to give some type of feedback or constructive criticism. Most people want that but never get it.
It changes to first person once the story actually gets going so I hope you enjoy
As long as its not confusing like the last one i read XD i'm sure it'll be fine.
