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Comic: https://m.tapas.io/series/Acroalis
What comes to my mind first as an observation, is that the art has improved a lot since the start of the comic. I can tell that Guilherme is also trying to make the quality of the pages better, by upgrading the font and the speech bubbles. The story reminds me a lot of video games and I found interesting how I could have the characters make different choices. The characters are also fun to get to know and follow. In general, this is a nice work.
This doesn't mean that there's no room for improvement. With the new font and speech bubbles, the comic became a bit uncomfortable to read on a phone because of the small font. I also noticed some Japanese sound effects and onomatopoeia, which I think is not fitting at all for an English comic because English readers can't really read or understand these words.
Also, (this isn't something bad since the art style is pretty nice, but) since this is a fantasy/ adventure comic, I'd like to see the coloring be a bit more sharp and defined. The current style is perfect for horror and such, but for fantasy and adventure, I think a more sharp and defined coloring would look awesome!
Overall, I can tell there was a lot of work put into this. Congratulations on making so many episodes and good luck with the rest of the comic! I totally recommend this to anyone who loves adventure and rpg games.
Comic: https://m.tapas.io/series/Acroalis
What comes to my mind first as an observation, is that the art has improved a lot since the start of the comic. I can tell that Guilherme is also trying to make the quality of the pages better, by upgrading the font and the speech bubbles. The story reminds me a lot of video games and I found interesting how I could have the characters make different choices. The characters are also fun to get to know and follow. In general, this is a nice work.
This doesn't mean that there's no room for improvement. With the new font and speech bubbles, the comic became a bit uncomfortable to read on a phone because of the small font. I also noticed some Japanese sound effects and onomatopoeia, which I think is not fitting at all for an English comic because English readers can't really read or understand these words.
Also, (this isn't something bad since the art style is pretty nice, but) since this is a fantasy/ adventure comic, I'd like to see the coloring be a bit more sharp and defined. The current style is perfect for horror and such, but for fantasy and adventure, I think a more sharp and defined coloring would look awesome!
Overall, I can tell there was a lot of work put into this. Congratulations on making so many episodes and good luck with the rest of the comic! I totally recommend this to anyone who loves adventure and rpg games.
Thank you so much for your support on the series😀
If you end up liking it you could always stick for more updates
If you end up liking it you could always stick for more updates
Is it possible to collab on something? If it is, can you please collab with me? Im thinking a gay high school love story
Hello! I'd love to, but I'm actually working on a comic right now, which will be released soon, so I don't have much time >< If you don't mind taking it slow though, hit me up with a private message:)
yeah i dont mind OwO and thank you!
I'm so happy that you support Blue Life. And you find my comic interesting by subscribe, I will make you a savior in the next update. (If you don't mind?)
Sure! You can do it haha. Thanks for your support as well!
When you got Tip unlocked I tip you as promice
Thank you! I supported and subbed too!
Well. I guess we have a thing together. I promise to give you feedback
As promised here is my feedback. In a storytelling perspective, you got the writing skills going well. You truly got the plot phasing the right way. As a personal reader, I can’t rely on the feelings that the cute boys are feeling. I do not understand boy gay. But I must say that the way the story portrays them, only makes me happy on their behalf. This ”blind date” of the two of us has been a great experience. I will never have read a novel like this otherwise. I might adapt my experience to my Blue Life at some point. Never had I guessed that I one day should do a BL comic
Thank you! I'm really glad you think that way and I hope you'll continue reading this or some other story (I have another idea for a story that's not BL haha) of mine in the future :) I know I'll be reading yours lol
Look out for my comic on Thursday.
