Oh, I'm just loving it! Love how baby girl listens to her mom, so exciting. Love how our young guy leaps out of bed for his first job and the superb lighting job you do. You have such enjoyable characters. The father is so life like! Here's some normal editing stuff.
Spelling: (who's time "where" up) needs to be were.
Grammar: (They worked together to keep peace "to" the afterlife.) change to in.
Keep up this wonderful work. It's so enjoyable and has fantastic artwork!
Death and Time, deal with what happens to humans once they die. Death decides to give his youngest son his first ever task, but instead of taking a life, he ends up having to protect one instead. Kai must live in the human world to protect this person. The problem is Kai has never been to the human world, and doesn't really know how to act like one either.