Just read your comic, it has a lot of potential so far! The pages... episodes? Are a little confusing due to the amount of text, panel placement, clutter and the speech bubble placement.
Also in episode one the exposition about who is and isn't immune confused me at first since, assuming this is what you mean, Autism is a developmental disability or disorder rather than a mental illness. I can understand if you prefer calling it that, though! (Calling Autism a disability can sound really insensitive.) Your word choice didn't bother me after realizing what you meant, I was just puzzled for a moment and wanted to make you aware in case other potential readers have the same response... although I doubt they will, I'm kind of overly technical about medical and mental health stuff.
Anyways, I like this so far, and look forward to reading more in the future!
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