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Jan 25, 2020
UPDATE 20/10/2020: Changed the page to a scroll format :)
(EDIT: I updated to a clearer and less confusing font, plus I removed the blur on the text! The speech bubble blur was more time consuming to edit, but in new pages there wont be text bubble blur either! <3)
This one took longer than it should have :')
I'm hoping to get through this first chapter pretty quickly because this is before the apocalypse. (Except the end, where the apocalypse actually happens.) This first chapter is pretty short though, so it won't be long until I get into the good stuff <3
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I came from the critque page. I like the art and character design very relaxing and cute. I can tell u put a lot of work into this and it shows. The only thing that stands out is the pacing feels really slow and I don't know if that's intentional yet bc you just started. Also one thing I would like to point out is you have really good astomsphere. keep it up. subscribed for more.
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