Ch. 1: Page 7
Jul 26, 2015
those steampunk bullies are the worst. with their gears and their goggles. thinkin they own the place
William J Bowles
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It's hard for to get a good read on Graeme. Is she supposed to be a bully? Because she's inviting Parsnip to a party, which doesn't sound very mean (unless it's a trap). Or is she just an obsessive "cool kid" who thinks she's doing Parsnip a favor, but is being entirely too pushy about it? It's hard for me to dislike her if I can't even tell if she's mean or not, and I can't sympathize with her if I can't tell if she has any redeeming qualities. For that matter, it's hard for me to side with Parsnip if the only reason for their conflict is her determination to do nothing at all.
It's not a story breaker by any means, but it does make these characters a little harder to connect to.
That said, I do kind of love this part:
"Kinda bothers me that you were watching my parents make out."
Yeah. It kinda bothers me, too.
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