Edit! I've fixed the beginning now and added a couple pages to the front--hopefully things are a little smoother this way. For those who have already read, let me know what you think and thanks for all your patience!
That is possibly the oddest first chapter I've seen. Shaun looks a cop, but even the worst cops I've seen wouldn't act that badly around a friend unless they were responding poorly to a drug. The oblivious hunter dressed up like a city boy? I can't imagine what he's up to, either. The main character is interesting, though. He's like my dream self. "Oh, hey, I should have known I'll be in the middle of another crazy nightmare tonight. Maybe I can survive this?"
Zachary Takk is a magnet for danger, and is convinced that Death himself has been hunting him. He’s escaped by the skin of his teeth from the day he was born and the day he rides his new motorcycle for the first time is no different– except that it changes everything. For him, and for the small, hidden town of Marsh Hallows... *Mild content warning: teenager with gun, minor amounts of blood, non-gory death, some heavy themes
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