There they are... god ive been looking forward to this page. theres totally no subtext here. none. youre imagining things, totally nothing going on here at all and definitely not one sided *screams into pillow*
Is english not your first language? Just asking because "I" should be capitalized every time it appears in a sentence and is referring to someone talking :) Might be good to have someone look over your text before you publish-- there are quite a few smaller errors like this!
(just on this page alone, "were" should be "we're" and "its" should be "it's")
Love flourishes between a Seamstress and Soldier, what could go wrong?
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10 Years have passed after The Great War, yet the ripple is still felt every day in Saint-Maple, The Gates of Abya Yala.
Cannons still line the ramparts, soldiers still patrol the streets at all hours, whispers of revolution seep from the shadowy underbelly of the lower quarters. Its not hard to hear stories of men disappearing in the night, eccentric mafioso's throwing lavish but violent parties and killers crazed by experimental drugs...
...Yet life goes on, the city held in peace by the hardworking men and women of The 103 Mercury Cavalry.
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