Prologue (1)
May 26, 2023
JoJoNecchuu
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Ancient Egypt never gets old as a setting for a story. I was a bit skeptical of the protagonist going out stealing items, but after seeing her motives, I reversed my opinion. It looks like you also have a good knowledge of ancient Egyptian culture and such, which makes all the little details in the story quite interesting. A few things that bugged me were the backgrounds, which looked sort of bland and simple, and the occasional PNG, which looked a bit out of place. Either way, very good work! :)
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