I love the way this starts out! The storytelling is, of course, great (gradual reveals are always nice)--but I also love how the visuals you made do such a nice job at drawing the reader down in a natural, smooth way. I was particularly impressed by the scale, which *felt* heavy! I'm looking forward to seeing more :)
Abandoned in Egypt as a child, Saphira has resigned herself to the life of a thief, but the gods might have other plans. Not only does she get tangled in the crown prince's struggle for the throne, she soon finds herself in the center of a prophecy to save the world.
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