6. The Supradian Conflict -Part Two- (Pages 1-4)
Mar 29, 2024
As the Supradian races towards certain death in Sarkesa, the rebels clash against the Cerberus First Squad in a desperate struggle for survival.
PLJ
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Awesome, Part 2 jumped right off the cliffhanger straight into an action scene. Three things I wanna comment:
Scott figured out a solution to the pin I hadn’t thought of. After all they don’t need to get to the station specifically, just get the three of them inside the city. Assuming they can get to the conductor’s cabin
I enjoy sets where the action is divided up like a videogame stage. Asha and Fiadh will have to team-fight Boss A, and Scott Boss B, then traverse the train to reach Nitani at the final section of the map (also I like the idea of the snowy light streaming through the windows onto them on that last page)
Before this I hadn’t actually realised the Cerberus were more than just the single swatteam in this arc. The idea there will be way more cerberus intercepting the train if it goes off is a worthy decision for what the makeshift signal is, it’s a much more intimidating and immediate threat than the unknown soldiers at the station
All in all really good intro. Didn’t drone, summed up the circumstances and their plan short and sweet, and good visuals to illustrate what they mean instead of lengths and lengths of textbox. I’m excited to see them act on it!
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