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WHAT HAPPENS IN THE DARK, STAYS IN THE DARK: PART 20

popsiclestick

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hey hello
i'm bringing in archer's thoughts in this page, and as they haven't really appeared before i'd like to know if it works!
this is a pretty experimental comic as it's my first attempt, and i want to tell the story in the best way i can :v

also!! on a completely different note: for any new followers, i have a twitter over here https://twitter.com/sargentumcomic where u can see lil sketches n things, and me moaning about drawing

#BUT_YA__PLS_LET_ME_KNOW_YOUR_THOUGHTS #i_want_to_know_if_this_makes_sense

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Pyomatic

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Ah I like archer's thoughts. Usually in writing a person switch (from third to first) is a no no, but I think it can work in a comic. I'll admit, it took me a couple read throughs before I realised it was meant to be him, so maybe if you ever go back over this you could have it introduced in the prologue? but now that it is introduced, i'm looking forward to more little bits of archer's 'voice' and opinions. Plus, orelie is precious in her bonnet

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SARGENTUM

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After Archer makes a dubious deal with a witch in exchange for even more dubious powers, he and his reluctant friend are dragged into an epic journey for redemption, meeting saints and sinners as they go.
Contains elements from Cornish/English mythology, and aggressive chickens, witches and morris dancers

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