Please note that Tapas no longer supports Internet Explorer.
We recommend upgrading to the latest Microsoft Edge, Google Chrome, or Firefox.
Home
Comics
Novels
Community
Mature
More
Help Discord Forums Newsfeed Contact Merch Shop
Publish
Home
Comics
Novels
Community
Mature
More
Help Discord Forums Newsfeed Contact Merch Shop
__anonymous__
__anonymous__
0
  • Publish
  • Ink shop
  • Redeem code
  • Settings
  • Log out

The Quiet Immortal

The First Fracture

The First Fracture

Jul 11, 2025

They moved quickly.
There was no choice.

The fractures were multiplying across the world now — like cracks in glass, spreading outward from some invisible impact. Entire villages had vanished overnight, swallowed into void pockets. Cities woke to find their skies crawling with impossible geometries. Entire rivers now ran black beneath unnatural moons.

The Hollow was eating reality.

And somewhere beneath it all pulsed the origin:
The First Fracture.


Their only lead came from an old name:
The Cartographer.

Elian hadn't heard that name whispered in over two centuries.

"He’s real?" Cray asked skeptically as they traveled north through the Ruined Expanse.

"He was," Elian said. "Whether he still is…"

Lysara, guiding from the front, finished his sentence:
"—we’ll find out."

The Cartographer was a rogue Anchor — one who had defected during the earliest days of the Pact. He hadn’t joined Malrek, but neither had he stayed with the Wardens. Instead, he'd vanished into the wild realms, obsessively mapping the fractures as they spread.

According to myth, he had seen the First Fracture with his own eyes.


They reached his last known location at dusk — a dead plateau known as The Weeping Plateau.

The land itself sobbed beneath their feet — faint, rhythmic pulses of air rising from deep beneath the cracked surface.
The wind moaned like something grieving.

At its center stood an ancient tower.

It looked impossible — spiraling upward in defiance of geometry, its upper levels curving sideways, then downward again, forming impossible loops.

"The Cartographer’s Sanctum," Lysara whispered.

Cray stared at it with clear unease.
"Do we go in?"

Elian’s eyes narrowed.
"We have to."


Inside, the air was thick with warping pressure. The walls were made of smooth obsidian, etched with maps — not of continents, but of fractures. Dozens. Hundreds.

Some stretched into the stars.

Some bled downward into black pits.

Some simply ended mid-line, as if the Cartographer had run out of sanity while drawing them.

"This is… wrong," Calen murmured, tracing one with his finger. "These aren’t just fractures of space. They’re fractures of time. Of possibility."

They climbed for what felt like hours, the tower folding upon itself in impossible loops.

And then — finally — they reached him.


The Cartographer was no longer human.

Or perhaps he never had been.

He sat in the center of a chamber suspended between multiple gravitational pulls — his body hovering slightly off the floor, arms elongated, fingers moving constantly as they traced new maps into the air with light itself.

His face was featureless. A smooth slate.
His voice did not come from his mouth but from the air itself.

"Warden. You have come late."

Elian approached slowly.

"We seek the First Fracture."

The Cartographer paused. His fingers twitched.

"The First Fracture does not wish to be found."

"It’s the only way to stop what's coming," Lysara said. "The Hollow is bleeding through every realm. We need to sever its root."

The Cartographer rotated slightly in the air, its head cocked as though amused.

"Sever? No. You cannot sever what predates your world."

"But it can be closed," Elian pressed.

The Cartographer’s hands shifted again. A glowing sphere formed in the air before them — a map unlike any they’d seen.

It showed the fractures as veins radiating from a single central wound — one so deep it pierced the foundation of existence itself.

At its core was a hollowed spiral — pulsing faintly.

The First Fracture.

"Here," the Cartographer whispered.
"But it is not on your world. It is beneath your world."

Calen inhaled sharply.
"The Underfold."

Even Elian's breath slowed.

The Underfold was legend — a collapsed realm beneath physical existence, where the oldest of the Old Masters had first whispered.

The Cartographer nodded faintly.

"Malrek searches even now. And others follow. When all factions converge upon it, the true war will begin."

"How do we get there?" Lysara asked.

The Cartographer's fingers drew a single line in the air — a glowing tear in space.

"Through sacrifice."


Suddenly — a pulse.

The Sanctum shuddered.

The walls bled light. The fractures twisted.

And then — voices. Dozens. Hundreds.

The air cracked as portals opened around them.

Figures poured into the tower — cultists from multiple factions.

The First Shard. The Watchers. And new ones Elian had never seen before — draped in emerald wrappings, with insectile eyes.

Cray swore under his breath.
"They found us."

The Cartographer’s voice echoed one final time:

"The Deep War has begun. Choose your side, Warden."


Elian raised the Memory Blade.
His voice calm — terrifyingly calm.

"Circle formation!" he barked. "Protect Calen. Lysara — shield the Cartographer if you can. Cray, burn everything that moves."

The cultists surged forward, their inhuman chants filling the air as the tower spiraled in on itself.

And the first true battle of the Deep War began.

ugoizunwa
ugoizunwa

Creator

Comments (0)

See all
Add a comment

Recommendation for you

  • What Makes a Monster

    Recommendation

    What Makes a Monster

    BL 75.7k likes

  • Invisible Bonds

    Recommendation

    Invisible Bonds

    LGBTQ+ 2.4k likes

  • Touch

    Recommendation

    Touch

    BL 15.6k likes

  • Silence | book 1

    Recommendation

    Silence | book 1

    LGBTQ+ 27.3k likes

  • Primalcraft: Scourge of the Wolf

    Recommendation

    Primalcraft: Scourge of the Wolf

    BL 7.1k likes

  • Invisible Boy

    Recommendation

    Invisible Boy

    LGBTQ+ 11.5k likes

  • feeling lucky

    Feeling lucky

    Random series you may like

The Quiet Immortal
The Quiet Immortal

672 views0 subscribers

The Quiet Immortal is a dark fantasy epic set in a world where names are more than identity — they are power, memory, and chains.
At the center of the story is Elian, a soft-spoken boy burdened with something he can’t remember and a name he’s been forced to forget. Cursed with a mark that reacts to forces he doesn’t understand, Elian is pursued by a terrifying entity known only as the Harvester — a being that doesn’t kill, but consumes through remembrance. It collects names like relics and leaves its victims hollowed out, forgotten by everyone… including themselves.
Fleeing the creature’s invisible reach, Elian is joined by three unlikely companions: Lysara, a silver-tongued mercenary with a haunted past; Calen, a disillusioned apprentice who’s seen what obsession with magic can cost; and Veylen, an exile-scholar once sworn to silence, now determined to unravel the prophecy stitched into Elian’s skin. Together, they navigate a dying continent fractured by wars, echoes, and living ruins — each place more forgotten than the last, and each one inexplicably drawn to Elian’s presence.
As the journey unfolds, Elian begins to realize that the Harvester isn’t simply chasing him — it’s connected to him. It speaks in his dreams, mirrors his movements, and seems to know the version of him before the forgetting. The more he uncovers about himself, the more the world begins to tremble. Entire cities fade from memory, ancient gods stir in their graves, and a second sun threatens to rise — one not of light, but of voice.
At the story’s heart is the idea that memory is magic, and forgetting is violence. Names can bind or free. Words can resurrect or erase. And identity, once fractured, becomes a weapon in the wrong hands.
The Quiet Immortal blends lyrical storytelling with pulse-raising tension, veering between quiet introspection and high-stakes fantasy. It explores themes of loss, selfhood, sacrifice, and the terrifying cost of being truly seen.
Subscribe

19 episodes

The First Fracture

The First Fracture

27 views 0 likes 0 comments


Style
More
Like
List
Comment

Prev
Next

Full
Exit
0
0
Prev
Next