Saving a Woman...
Sep 08, 2016
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Copyediting ideas:
The duo decided to travel eastwards [towards (insert specific town name, or towards Lord Vannen's troops)]...they had some difficulties *on* the road.
I hope that helps! 😁 I'll throw down any other Copyediting suggestions as I come across them! :D
"...*on* a decent meal at an inn."
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