Wasn't gonna comment just bc I don't usually have anything to add to the conversation, haha, but honestly?? I love your art??? And I understand that your idol wasn't saying they hated your art, just that you could improve, and sure, go do what you gotta do to be the best you you can be. But at the same time I only read these things 30% for the art (don't smite me down pls) and 70% for the storyline, you know? So I'm reeeaaally gonna miss this while you put it on hold to improve your art. And I get that a lot of the story in comics is portrayed through body language and such, but at the same time, I don't know any of the characters yet, so no, I'm not really watching their every move, I'm just sort of going with the flow of the story. You wouldn't consider continuing to post the story and experimenting while style AS you do so, would you? Like, the more we get to know the characters, the better the art gets too, and then we're all in synch as the story unfolds? You don't have to--again; do what you gotta do, my man--but if you're even /barely/ considering it, know you have at least one fan who would be 800% all for that. Because your story is so interesting. But also, like, I'm not going anywhere, haha. (though I'll miss you -wipes tear from eye-)