Same thoughts as the first page, it looks horrid. Especially the clouds. I despise those clouds. I will have fixed some of the issues i have with these pages later on. I'll be finding my style for the webcomic throughout the first few pages.
On the mythical world of Mylur, Samrose Reese—a detective for the peace-keeping organization of Aegis—is tasked to find a fellow agent gone missing. It becomes clear that this task is only the first step for him and his friends in a long, wondrous, and dangerous journey: Traveling around a world that is wrestling between progress and regress, helping people of all kinds and qualities, and racing against a sinister plot that threatens to unravel the tenuous peace between the three civilized species of their world.
A new page every other Wednesday.
Warning: Violence, blood, and heavy themes.