#1 - Bold Adventures I
Nov 08, 2017
Bold Adventures (Part 1)
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So, hello!
My name is JP Nakashima and, partnered with the hot-headed (but kind) Guilherme Grassi, I created this comic!
As you may realize, English is not my native language, so I apologize if there are any grammar mistakes. You guys let me know! I'll work on it.
Welcome and we see each other every Wednesday!
im a moron
Top comment
Aye! For a start, its rather wordy. Im very sure the 6th panel doesnt need the text box to explain the transformation... More of just showing the transformation (during the reporter explaining the situation) and you can just explain the tireness induced from the transformation. The first and second panel is not as much as a problem. And the 5th panel text box could be opted out for another panel just showing kid Nicolas watching cartoons. Otherwise, nothing too horrendous, something worth sticking around :U
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