(Thumbnail is not the actual official character and is only temporary)
If you have any thoughts and/or critiques about the story so far I would absolutely love to hear them.
It's a good prolouge, but I think you shouldn't use the word 'house' a lot, try to see if sentences can do without it. Otherwise it was great, I can't wait for the art!
(The current cover photo is not the official cover and is only temporary.) A boy that runs from everything and is scared to let anyone in, one day meets a person that might change that.
(I will try to update as often as I can and with school ending soon I will most likely be updating a lot more often.)
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