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This is great so far! I don't normally read romances even though I do like love stories, because you can tell by page 12 what the ending will be. I like suspense. However, your writing style more than compensates. This is as intelligent as your MC is. I only wonder (if that's even the right word) that Scar isn't having more of an internal dilemma about what she's doing, if not from a moral then from an ethical, "If I'm found out I could lose my scientific standing because it depends not only on the doctor's recommendation but also on my integrity" standpoint.